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Love this poem, and I dnt believe that is ruined by a "cliche". You personalised it and made it about YOUR story. I liked it well done Dofs...

Absolutely love this, the emotion and content of this is easy to relate to!!! Excellent work, Keep it up. Dofs...

I love this idea and the way you produced the poem!! The title is great and Id like to say thanks 4 writing on this topic!! Good on ya!! Love ...

Wow, this is touching. Really loved this 1!! You turned a common idea into a very well structured original poem!! Well done. Dofs....

Love this one, it really hit an emotion. This is really good work, amazing. I could relate to this and understand a message behind this 1. Great ideas you have. ...

I really like this poem, you started with a message and portrayed an image to the readers!! Well done. Dofs....

Thanks for your comments guys, I am working on this 1 again... I am going to change the "you" error, I set this out this because I want to direct ...

This is probably a useless review!! But I just absolutely loved this, there is nothing else i can say. Its great. I love the title, it was a good choice!! ...

I believe the content of this, is rather interesting. However there is a lot of it and only half is necessary!!! It does sound like a story. If it was ...

I like this poem and it flows quite well. However I do believe it is lacking a bit of something. Possibly content or maybe just innapropriate wording!! Keep trying and ...

Love this, The rhyme is great and the idea is great!! I really cant criticise this 1 at all but absolutely love it!!! Dofs...

Well I think this was not too bad.. You put accross an idea and I do understand where it is coming from. However this is life and this is everything ...

Like this 1 also, I think its good you included 50, makes your message clear and everybody knows who he is!!! Love this style of rap Well done Dofs...

I think this is a great, emotion filled poem!!! You have mixed the repetition up and this makes it flow better. Love this, well done. Doffa...

Hmm not bad, bit short and not detailed enough. The descriptive words, encourage feelings from the readers!! Kepp it up, Doffa...